I really like the black and yellow vibes going on, the yellow really fits the target audience that you want, teen girls. To improve I would whiten her teeth a little bit because all the yellow around her gives her teeth a yellow tinge. I really like the photography but just general editing of the picture, like the dirty bottom of her shoe I don't like.
Your masthead is really creative and I actually like the colour scheme and fits your target audience. For improvement - I think that you should change the background to grey so you can remove the shadows. I think you should rub a bit of the A out where her hand is so you can see the full image completely. You should do something with the dirty bottom of her shoe and whiten it or make the picture into a mid-shot and also brighten up the picture. Add your price to it and add more cover lines. You could change the font to make it bolder and stand out. Overall, it's not bad.
I really like the black and yellow vibes going on, the yellow really fits the target audience that you want, teen girls.
ReplyDeleteTo improve I would whiten her teeth a little bit because all the yellow around her gives her teeth a yellow tinge. I really like the photography but just general editing of the picture, like the dirty bottom of her shoe I don't like.
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Your masthead is really creative and I actually like the colour scheme and fits your target audience.
ReplyDeleteFor improvement - I think that you should change the background to grey so you can remove the shadows. I think you should rub a bit of the A out where her hand is so you can see the full image completely. You should do something with the dirty bottom of her shoe and whiten it or make the picture into a mid-shot and also brighten up the picture. Add your price to it and add more cover lines. You could change the font to make it bolder and stand out. Overall, it's not bad.
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Your choice of image and masthead is good but you need to add more cover lines to make your cover eye catching and professional.
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